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  1. Sulux

    hahahahahahahah. I couldn’t have imagined that going any better if I tried. great work.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Hehe, thanks dude XD

  2. Resari

    so that was the throat, I think, I need to go back a few pages to get the general difference between elf and dwarf height. Also. Hilarious.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Well whatever it hit, it was certainly important :S

  3. Vaasref

    Of course.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      They never have any luck do they?

  4. Umbrin[Ger]

    If i were you, id make the barrel a lot thinner. Either this is the gun with the biggest caliber for a handgun in the world or the most unprecise firearm build so far. Whatever it is, it looks more like a newspaper role. Also, when i look at the clothing of Jun and the enchanted elves, there seems to be only one tailor in all of Tel’Lushan, might wanna add some additional colours. Apart from that, it is a great page. I really like your sense of humour.

    Gruß Umbrin

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Hehe, thanks man :D

      The gun is supposed to be a blunderbuss, so it’s got a little bigger barrel and end than normal rifles, but you’re right I might’ve widen it a little too much, I’ll check it for any future pages I draw.

      And yeh, as I explained to Rand on the previous page, light brown and orange are the colours of Tal’Lushan, the locals prefer wearing those colours for practical reasons (they’re cheap to buy and make) and for cultural/ethnic reasons, to better differentiate themselves from other ethnic groups, like the human and orc refugees like Kohta who have arrived in greater numbers in the last several decades. Kind of like how football fans prefer to wear their team colours, so they can see at a glance who is on whose ‘side’. So when the Dark Elves wanted to impersonate Lushani, those are the colours they’ll wear.

      • Sulux

        the thing about a blunderbuss is that it’s essentially a massive muzzle load shotgun. the barrel is very thick and especially so at the end due to its large muzzle blast. the widened cone is to allow “better” dispersal of the shot spread.

  5. Aemi

    Oh sweet, sweet irony.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      It does like bite one in the ass occasionally :D

      • Resari

        or somewhere in the throat/chest region anyway haha

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Hehe, doesn’t sound like you’re broken up by his suffering.

          Still the guy is trying to set explosives that will kill a lot of people, all in an effort to incite a war that will kill much more on top of that, so he kinda has it coming :S

          • Aemi

            Hehe, oh he had it coming alright. Serves him right for trying to kill Kohta, I don’t care if Kohta can be a bit of a pain in the as at times, but he’s still the protagonist and the main hero of this comic, even if he has his faults, and its easy to grow more positively attached to him than Ror’ken or the other dark elves.

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            Glad to hear your warming to Kohta, it’s kinda hard to give a character realistic flaws, but still make him likable enough to the audience.

            Kohta is good at heart, and ultimately selfless, it’s just that he has a bit of baggage and pre-conceived notions that he has to get over, like most of us I guess.

            As for Ror’Ken, well he’s different, as a villain, he gets to do whatever he wants, and have fun whilst he’s doing it too, so he might actually be easier to like, though of course, the more you get to know him, and how twisted he might be inside, you realise he’s not that likable.

            Or at least I hope so, it’s always good to have complicated characters that can’t be so easily summed up, and that’s what I’m going to keep working towards.

          • Aemi

            I’m much more like Ror’ken than Kohta, but I prefer a hero over a villain in 9 out of 10 cases. There are just those few villains who are just amazing!

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            Oh yeh I can certainly understand that point of view, and Ror’Ken might just be like that, if you can forgive him his reckless killing of possibly innocent people just cause it might make him laugh.

            I mean Ror’Ken is evil, and he certainly loves his job, but he’s not that sadistically evil, which makes him a little easier to relate to.

  6. A Certain Anonymous Person

    RIP Kohta October 1, 2012 – Feburary 27, 2015.

    We will never forget you. u_u

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Oh don’t worry mate, I wouldn’t count Kohta out just yet, sure he’s been impaled through the chest, with severe internal bleeding, hemorrhaged organs and suffering from rapid blood loss… but he’s not dead yet!

      … maybe?

    • Howler

      Well, even if he dies there’s a possibility for a short story about his visit in Heaven. You know, only female angels, wearing skimpy clothes and willing to do ANYTHING for a great hero *wink wink* Of course, Kohta would be mighty pissed when he’s ressurected just about when he’s getting his ‘reward’. Come to think of it, that sounds just like something that might happen :)

      • GroUser2907
        GroUser2907

        Hehe, it would be just Kohta’s luck too, for his dream afterlife only to be spoiled by Jun or someone else resurrecting him ‘early’.

        • A Certain Anonymous Person

          So he has a dream self? 0_o

          Is Jun going to kiss him to revive him or something :\

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            Well his ideal afterlife then, wherevever he’d wish to go after he died.

            And uhh, I dunno, that’s a pretty serious chest wound, I’m guessing he’s gonna need more than a kiss, lets just hope he’s not so far gone that necromancy is the only way she can bring him back, because Jun doesn’t really know much about healing magic.

        • Aemi

          Sounds like a way to bring Uncle back into the story.

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            Uncle certainly is an accomplished mage, though again he isn’t very skilled in the healing arts (it’s a very separate discipline) but if Jun can get Kohta to him pretty soon, then maybe he can help.

          • Steam punk engine magic heart GO!!!

  7. and the plan has failed, dark elfs have been noticed and the scheme is over :D

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Yup, it does look like the situation has gone FUBAR, all their best laid plans!

      • Aemi

        THE ALMIGHTY FUBAR HATH STRUCK AGAIN!

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Hehe, you better not cross the mighty FUBAR, he is very vindictive and keen to enact ironic punishments :S

  8. Korax

    Hurk strike again :D

    (But how he was able to make a sound after his brain was destroyed, will be mystery for me)

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      The Incredible Hurk!

      And it’s probably just the sound of air escaping/gurgling in his throat, or it could be he was hit in the throat, hence the noise.

      • Korax

        After posting that, I has this same idea (but it was too late to deleted it XD)

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Hehe, no worries dude.

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