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  1. NoFace

    Cause otherwise you’d be hearing this nonstop. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nPpKw8Vyhjs

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Hehe, good call, then again since the sword can talk he might be hearing this, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KN1WlLVoHSQ

      • TomeWyrm

        That’s actually what I thought the first link was going to be… Gods as useful as Navi was, she still annoyed the everliving SNOT out of me.

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Hehe, I played that game more times than I can count when I was a kid, but for the life of me I can’t actually remember her being all that annoying for some reason, which is weird with how many people go on about it.

  2. Sulux

    Jun is only educated in magic and history it seems.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Well she’s educated in history, but Magic is her passion, it’s the lens through which she sees the world.

  3. Marcus Wolf

    I know the teleport occurred in the previous page, but… My gods, the wedding, poor people, traumatized for life xDDDD

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Hehe, yeh that wasn’t really an auspicious start to their married life, some people might even claim it was a sign :P

      • Umbrin[Ger]

        You could give us an update on how the marriage went in a few pages.^^

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Hehe, well since the Troll Portal opened at the beginning of the ceremony I think it’s a good assumption to believe it didn’t happen :S

          • Marcus Wolf

            That one was the real Red Wedding for sure… xD

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            Hehe, nice.

  4. Aemi

    Ooooor it could be something mechanical, they are dwarves, not magi! Silly Jun, research the dwarves first rather than being gung-ho like Kohta was with those scheming Red Guard thieves.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Well it’s not likely that they’ve encountered many dwarves before, sure they’ve met the odd individual, but this ship is the height of their technological prowess, it’s a boat full of mystery for the young two adventurers :D

      • Aemi

        I see what you did there. ^_~ But perhaps some careful thinking would have been in order. I have to side with Kohta on this one.

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          :D

          And yeh it might be that caution is the better part of valour here, they never know what might happen on that boat :D

          • Aemi

            And if my knowledge of dwarves is correct, they don’t take kindly to unwanted visitors.

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            They certainly don’t at the best of times, and especially don’t when they find two people wandering the corridors of their most advanced warship, who aren’t supposed to be there…

  5. Resari

    and they go downstairs to find the most wild dwarven orgy ever committed to page, they quietly close the door and leave.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Uhhh… hehe, well funny you should mention it… :o

      • Koripec

        But better wach out with sex scenes (especially yuri ones) cuz CoolAimboy may start another moral crusade XD

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Hehe, well each to their own man.

          • Koripec

            True…it matter of taste ^^

    • Sarge_Buckwheat

      Orgy, or Charnel House?
      We’re talking dark elves with some serious PC plans tier stuff going on.

  6. Sunshinecame

    Hi Obhan, I have a request for the next female character that Kohta(hopefully) will be having sex with.
    Your art has improved a lot during the making of this comic, but even then there’s something that I have to criticize. When we finally got to see Shan naked I was quite disappointed of the size of her ass, especially because it actually looked bigger in clothing on a few pages. You can compare it to the size of the water nymphs’ and for an ass man like me, well.. it just isn’t enough.

    Otherwise I really liked Shan though(the way you drew her tits is PERFECT), especially the page where she’s about to fuck him cowgirl, it just has “Yes this is going to be good!” written all over it. And even though you drew her ass “flat” on the page where she strips down, I retained hope that you would see reason and draw it bigger and rounder on the next page.

    So for the next woman(whom I hope will be a voluptous dwarven gal) could you please give all the ass men who follow your work this treat, a big ass woman who knows what she wants(Shan was also lacking a bit in the dominant department, no offense).

    I hope this doesn’t come off as a rant, I just want to be heard – because your comic has such a tremendous potential, and it would be a shame if the sex isn’t up to par.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Hey dude, that’s np, I’m always happy to hear constructive criticism.

      I must admit I prefer breasts to ass myself, but that’s no reason to neglect such a nice part of the female form so I promise I will try harder to make sure they look as good as they can. Mistress Shan herself was supposed to have a fine and rounded figure but I probably didn’t spend as much time drawing it as I should have because her scenes involved more close up their genitalia and I was more keen at the time to make those look as good as possible, cause if I failed at that the whole scene would’ve looked bad as a result.

      Still I will try harder, I can’t make promises about the next few characters that are about to be introduced in the next few chapters, since their designs are pretty much finished, but I’ll keep your request in mind when developing others.

  7. Sunshinecame

    Or if you want to compare it to an ass that you drew more recently, compare it to Jun’s.

  8. So I’ve already seen links but I could see this in Kohta’s Future.
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8RuIXX4ntc

    Just saying, this series is built on the idea of fusing magic and machines to work as one whole technology.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Well now that would be interesting, it would be a good contrast for an elven or other high magic race to mirror the dwarves and embrace more magic based technology rather than steampunk style the dwarves seem to use. It certainly would be fun to design and work on.

      • Well considering our “open minded” group of adventures here. I’m sure they could pull something together providing they had some one with a itch for machines. We already have a few whom are obsessed with Magic, so having one with a obsession with machines would kinda press that idea into motion but ey who knows.

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Well we are going to get a certain character soon who is good with machines, though more of a steampunk variety. Still I imagine Jun and Uncle are very much interested in magetech :D

  9. Erica N.

    You guys! The gals in this strip tend to be much too well endowed for my taste. How do they run without knocking themselves senseless? (There’s a visual joke there; imagine Kahli running around topless …). Jun is my favorite; aside from liking gals she is also at least reasonably proportioned.

    Although she does need to get some formal magical training. The danger posed by poorly trained magic users is probably what prompted this particular state to outlaw magery.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Sorry about that :S

      And yeh sorry again about the girls proportions, they do trend towards the unrealistic too much of the time, well this is a fantasy comic so there is some leeway/expectation there, but I myself prefer more variety in both male and female forms so I will try better in that department. Also I’ll try better to keep the characters figures consistent with themselves, they have tended to inflate or deflate when I wasn’t paying enough attention :S

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