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  1. SpaceKing

    It was at this moment that Khali realized, her mother knew all of that would happen.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Hehe, with her mother, that’s actually a pretty safe bet ๐Ÿ˜›

  2. Tigermark

    Hmmmm, is Khali suspicious that this was all a setup to test their loyalty, and the now dead spy just a pawn to her mother’s intrigues?

    Weeeellll either that or she didn’t perform well in certain areas, so she was expendable.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Hehe, I like the idea there was a checklist, and Elana just had too many red crosses to green ticks, so she became and expendable pawn ๐Ÿ™

  3. lena

    She did what? Made some grave mistake?

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      She crossed Kamala, death at that point was inevitable really ๐Ÿ™‚

      • lena

        Khaly said MOTHER YOU WOULDNT…? What Kamala did do?

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Well this is Kamala we’re talking about, what hasn’t she done? ๐Ÿ˜›

          • Well she hasn’t died. Wink wink.

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            As far as you know ๐Ÿ˜›

          • This isnโ€™t Dragon Ball!

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            It’s a comic… in a fantasy setting… with an anime like art style… surely being dead is like a short vacation, they’ll be back in no time ๐Ÿ˜›

  4. Howler

    Oh, great, let’s wait another week for this cliffhanger ;p On the other hand – I’m pretty sure it’s gonna be something VERY important. “-Wait a minute. -Is there anything else? -Did you know… that I like strawberries?!” *Dun Dun DUN!!!*

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      And of course that leads into the next cliffhanger where she reveals… that she’s actually allergic to strawberries!?! DUN DUN DUN! ๐Ÿ˜›

      This comic practically writes itself! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Since when does a computer do it’s own work? You write it. We’re the co-writers.

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Hehe, you do know there is actually AI generated fiction out there now?

          So technically, computers CAN do their own work ๐Ÿ˜›

          • Ah, but who PROGRAMMED that AI to do that? ๐Ÿ˜›

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            Well yeh, until the singularity, then there’s no need for writers or programmers at all!… or anything else I guess, damn robot apocalypse ๐Ÿ™

  5. Vashna

    I bet mother dearest knew all along she was a spy

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      She certainly didn’t seem all that surprised to suddenly be held hostage by her former lover, though we don’t know much about Kamala yet, that might just be a Tuesday for her ๐Ÿ˜›

  6. Elias2201

    It was a rest by khali’s mom?!? O_o

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Dun Dun DUN!

      I guess we’ll have to wait till the next exciting episode to find out ๐Ÿ˜€

  7. FF

    One would wonder what shocks Khali so much.

    Or what she *asks* if her mother did. (It *can’t* be “having boned the chick”, because she already knows she did).

    Also, “adopting, and setting herself as a target for, a hot spy so she can a) provide a loyalty test for the other adopted elf, b) provide a bonding test for Khali and her new “sister”, and c) get to bone the hot spy – all acording to keikaku” also *can not* be what shocks her so much, at it’s no doubt a regular kind of event in Dark Elven society.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Oh yeh, to a Dark Elf this kind of drama must be so mundane to them, or maybe the fact that they’re all still wearing clothes and one of them hasn’t been sacrificed to an Elder God might make it a shocking deviation from the norm ๐Ÿ˜›

  8. Manuel

    The mother-daughter resemblance between those two is just unbelievable๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Thanks dude, I’ve tried pretty hard to make Kamala, just Khali + The Passage of time (turning her burning hatred and prejudices into a a blasรฉ attitude and a drinking habit :P)

  9. Resari

    Sounds like people were being tested… and people may not be aware of that!

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      I wonder how well they all did? though I’m pretty sure I could guess Elana’s grade ๐Ÿ™

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Must be pretty hard to give someone constructive criticism after that course ๐Ÿ˜›

          • Elana wonโ€™t be needing it where sheโ€™s going.

          • GroUser2907
            GroUser2907

            Well that’s true I guess, if a bit mean ๐Ÿ˜›

  10. She knew all along!

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      It is possible, in fact she is the head of a Dark Elf House, she might’ve orchestrated the whole thing! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • So she has sex with her then kills her.
        Why am I not surprised?

        • GroUser2907
          GroUser2907

          Well that’s one way to avoid the awkward question of ‘Should she call?’ the day after ๐Ÿ˜›

  11. ShadowMage

    Khali:…Oh Gods dammit, Mom! I swear to Dark Elf Christ, IF YOU SET ALL OF THIS UP BEFOREHAND…!!
    Kamala: ( อกยฐ w อกยฐ) …I have no idea what you’re talking about, dear… *totally not convincing anyone*
    Khali: OH DON’T YOU FUCKING EVEN!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW SCARED I WAS FOR YOUR SAFETY?! DO YOU HAVE EVEN AN INKLING OF HOW MUCH DISTRESS YOU’VE CAUSED ME, AFTER ALL THE BULLSHIT I PUT UP WITH FOR YOUR SAKE ON THE SURFACE?!!
    Jial: *even she realizes Kamala is lying* …Seriously, mistress? You deliberately put yourself in danger, making your own daughter think you might be killed and scaring her half to death, just to test her? I’ve killed a lot of enemies in the most gruesome ways–some of them were even my former friends and allies–and even I think that’s just… really fucked up.
    Kamala: ( >3<) Oh, pooh… you girls are no fun at all.
    Khali: ( เฒ _เฒ ) …Fun?
    Khali: ( เฒ ็›Šเฒ ) …FUN?!!
    Jial: (โ—‰nโ—‰ ) …Oh, dear…!
    Khali: ( เฒฅะ”เฒฅ) …aaaaAAAAAGGGH–!!
    *static*
    *cut to a “Sorry! We are experiencing technical difficulties” screen (https://mgtvwkrg.files.wordpress.com/2015/10/techdifficulties.jpg ), except the Native American profile head at the top is replaced with a walleyed, mentally unhinged, insane manic laughing Khali head*

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      You have a Native American guy on your version? In our country it’s a girl with a chalkboard and a super creepy doll for some reason… ๐Ÿ™

      Hehe, but seriously that’s good writing there man, I especially like the emoticon descent into Khali Hulking out ๐Ÿ˜€

  12. So… my guess is that she adopted /more/ sisters for Khali to freakout over.

    • GroUser2907
      GroUser2907

      Hehe, yup, and every second one she adopts is also a spy! ๐Ÿ˜€

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